Soft Parade I am probably way off the mark here but is this about sex during asphyxiation?

Soft Parade I am probably way off the mark here but is this about sex during asphyxiation?

I didnt write it with that in mind, this was one poem that i just started to write and when it was written i wasnt sure what it was, definately could be interpeted as such.

Thanks for the comment.

I thought this was a very, very well written piece. I loved your use of the English Language. It was inspiring. A genuinly enjoyable read. Thank you.

Brad

P.S. Please comment and vote on every poem you read

Vey impressing.
i found this poem realy interesting from title to toe.lol
no really very creative..
extremely unclear and yes cause i took it in a totally different way than Ron

5/5

Well done SP, excellent choice of words and rhyme. Seems you know a bit about being a Snake Charmer :-)