Comments : Butterfly Caught

  • 7 years ago

    by Sylvia

    Nice work. How cruel it would be to capture a butterfly and not let them go to live on and the same would be true of a person.

  • 7 years ago

    by Kimberley

    "Hold me every so close
    as I say goodbye"

    I really loved this ending line. It really closed the poem well and I was moved by it. The entire piece is exceptional but that last stanza and that line there were my favorites. I adore this. You've done a fantastic job, and if you don't win something with this then there's something wrong in the world. Really amazing job. 5/5. :)

  • 7 years ago

    by TJ Arizona Eagle

    Very very nice poem. you picked the perfect words for this write. good going girl

  • 7 years ago

    by Kuro

    How ironic! you used the phrase Sands of Time! :)

    it was fate that i read this today. well enjoyed.