Comments : Within the Seasons

  • 7 years ago

    by Bradley Peter

    I didn't really like the last four lines much, but I thought the rest of it was strong and intriguing. I particularly liked the rhyme of 'gallows'. I don't believe I've ever had the pleasure of seeing that done before. It's nice to see fresh rhymes.

    Brad

    P.S. Please comment and vote on every poem you read.