Comments : City Wilderness

  • 7 years ago

    by Rania Moallem

    WELL..I think you have left both of us speechless...so my smart minded decided to copy this (msn chat) and let you know what we think about the AMAzing piece..since we are left without words

    nana says:
    word
    heh
    I like Janes poem
    a loooottt
    don;t you?
    the title is pretty interesting
    Brittney says:
    I nominated it hahaha
    nana says:
    worth it !!
    but it left me speecchless
    llike
    i am not sure what to say
    Brittney says:
    me too I know! I dont know what to comment!!
    nana says:
    but worth a front page
    Brittney says:
    yes!
    nana says:
    don;t you love this wording damn?
    so dark yet
    i am not sure what to think
    Brittney says:
    yes i do. she is SO good.
    nana says:
    yeps

  • 7 years ago

    by Rania Moallem

    Ya ya these 2 5's
    are US

  • 7 years ago

    by Rania Moallem

    So my smart minded decided

    ^^I meant MIND..:P but you already know how I will rarely edit; or reread what I wrote..

    however...

    ya ya funkyyyy for sure..and

    what more could you ask for ?/

    Why are you making her feel like she even asked for all this crap ? LOL

  • 7 years ago

    by silvershoes

    I wish I could like all your comments, haha

  • 7 years ago

    by Rania Moallem

    Lmaooooooooooooooooo

    i will facebookulize

    p&q

    hey britt: just gotta talk to my lovely husband for more tools :P

    :)

  • 7 years ago

    by Sungrl And Mrs Whatsit

    You nailed that side of it, sister....

  • 7 years ago

    by Jad

    I really liked this poem. It was very thought provoking and I am kinda speechless at the end as well. The emotions in this piece are ranging from everywhere. The poem seems to be telling more of a story then just being emotional though if it was then those were some deep lines. I really like how it flowed from each line to the next and also the structure was descent as well. I tried finding one part that stood out to me but I couldn't find one as it really was all creative and unique.

    All in all, I think you are evolving in maturity as a poet and your talent is ever increasing as you write. Hope to see more wonderful poetry from you. Great job and keep writing.

  • 7 years ago

    by Cindy

    Congrats on your win!
    Take care Cindy

  • 7 years ago

    by aquila kalas

    Really, we are pressed

  • 7 years ago

    by SWEET PEA 318

    Hey this is good. lol. totaly how a city is lol.