WELL..I think you have left both of us speechless...so my smart minded decided to copy this (msn chat) and let you know what we think about the AMAzing piece..since we are left without words
I like Janes poem
the title is pretty interesting
I nominated it hahaha
worth it !!
but it left me speecchless
i am not sure what to say
me too I know! I dont know what to comment!!
but worth a front page
don;t you love this wording damn?
so dark yet
i am not sure what to think
yes i do. she is SO good.
I really liked this poem. It was very thought provoking and I am kinda speechless at the end as well. The emotions in this piece are ranging from everywhere. The poem seems to be telling more of a story then just being emotional though if it was then those were some deep lines. I really like how it flowed from each line to the next and also the structure was descent as well. I tried finding one part that stood out to me but I couldn't find one as it really was all creative and unique.
All in all, I think you are evolving in maturity as a poet and your talent is ever increasing as you write. Hope to see more wonderful poetry from you. Great job and keep writing.