Comments : Forever broken, start to end,

  • 4 years ago

    by Kate

    I loved this. The flow was good and I love the rhyme. The entire thing was well organized to me it seems.
    Yet, its message is so tragic. Which is another thing I love. It seems that you poured your heart into this one and it shows. It is easy to relate to. Great job at getting the message across.
    My favorite part would be the last stanza. It really speaks to me.. And it makes a connection between the knife and the veins.
    Great read.

  • 4 years ago

    by DarkLight

    Did i forget to mention wat amazing it sound?

  • 4 years ago

    by DarkLight

    Did i forget to mention wat amazing it sound?

  • 4 years ago

    by DarkLight

    Did i forget to mention wat amazing it sound?