Comments : Why wont you just let me go?

  • 13 years ago

    by PinkyPrincess

    Aww this is a very sad and heartfelt poem... I could relate to some parts and feel it... You've expressed yourself well.

    I do suggest you reread it and edit and correct some of the typos and grammar mistakes... It will make the poem much stronger...

    For example this:
    I never though we would grew apart from each other
    But it happened

    was meant to be this:

    "I never thought we would grow apart from each other
    But it happened"

    - Do you get what I mean?

    Great job though ! =D