Mmmm, interesting write.
It's really enjoyable to the eye and the ear to end and begin the same way.

Amazing

You really didn't see it less. Hence, Peace is what comes after strife. Anger roused with pride, pleads for war. Where focus is lost, strife is gained. Out of mercy, love is rooted. Good job, continue with the zeal!

I really like this one. You wrote it well. you chose your words well.