You have done an amazing job describing how the body reacts to pleasure. This is greatly written. I could picture what was happening.
Great Job
Corina

I can't believe I stumbled on this... WOW. Very nice, almost creepy - Sexy though.

Wow im speachless that was qreat...your a amazing writer

WOW.... can i get kidnapped like her??? i'm sorry but instead of that being the WORST day possible for her i believe it was enlightening and enjoyful and seriously i envy the girl in this poem what i wouldn't love to trade places with her lol good job Dawn 5/5