Comments : 2008 Journal

  • 12 years ago

    by Jordan

    This is progressive.

    The form exceeds anything I've seen from most poems anywhere. So smart and concise. I know exactly what the details of this poem feel like and so in that sense it speaks to me, I suppose. The null stanza in the middle fascinates me, first as a poet and lover of art but most importantly as a linguist. You're detailing a great phenomenon here - speech conveyed through the absence of words. This poem, I think, is monumental for me and my development as a writer.

    Bra-f*ing-vo for this!

    Oh, I love it by the way.