Wow this is a very deep poem :( someone must of hurt you badly sorry you had to get hurt like that!!

Wow, this is so sad I almost cried, wonderful poem, truly amazing, two thumbs up!!!!!! I love your expression and emotion, never stop writing!!

This piece definitely holds a lot of bitterness and rage due to the heartache you experienced. Very raw emotions throughout.

Only suggestions I have is to use more punctuation and maybe break this up in stanzas.