Interesting... I like the concept of how "not every man" is like a certain way... I think women forget that... people forget that everyone is different and not everyone will hurt them. I found the line about not every woman a bit out of place, but in a good way. Well done :)

I nominated this because of the truth behind its simple form, i thought it was A great piece to talk about concept. onething id want you to think about is the line bout not every man is a pig. it is forced to have a flow..
right? u better let go of it..the poem is deeper without it. anyway well done

I dont delete anything. Im VERY strongly against editing my poems. I write my original thought and keep it that way. All of it is freestyled I guess you can say

BUT Thank you so much =D lets not forget that!

BUT Thank you so much =D lets not forget that!

Lol okay! :)