Comments : I must awaken

  • 12 years ago

    by Britt

    I looooved this poem, especially your first set in the string. Thought this accompanied the picture PERFECTLY! Love, love, love! So creative!

  • 12 years ago

    by Melpomene

    Kay,

    I was extremely impressed by this when I read it. Not only did you nail the task of creating a string Haiku but you described the picture beautifully and your words were a poet version of this Dali painting. You mentioned the many important elements that were symbolic in his painting, the flesh, the virgin, pomegranate, Tigers, and I also thought the insertion of 'Pachyderm' was quite clever, not something I would of thought of and that is why I adored it.

    I agree with Britt, this was very creative and I was fond of the first stanza of the string in particular. Though I also really enjoyed the ending, It was a little more simplistic than the first three and it wrapped the entire poem nicely.

    The concept and symbolism through this is lovely.
    -Mel.

  • 12 years ago

    by Cinnamonspice

    What a wonderful painting made with the brush of words. It was vivid and imaginative. What a beautiful painter you are :-)

  • 12 years ago

    by Ste

    I don't know the picture but i now see it in my mind's eye!