My poetry may not be about me all the time or even about people i know but it does relate to true storys with my opinion into it:)

Wow this poem is wow Haha I adore you this poem

The ability to write about such things without being personally involved is a powerful gift. You write well, there is strong potential in you. May luck favor you in the future.

One of the best ive read in month the emotion the reality that people have to deal with im so glad u wrote this i write about stuff like this but its one i havnt done and now theres no point this was so perfect stunning piece ... you remind me so much of my stuff honestly this was awesome 5/5

An awesome and Excellent piece of writing.. English is not my mother language but how easy it was for me to read all the poem... such a simple words and a nice piece of flow. i must say here this poem makes me feel so sad. because the way it is. such a sad poem..

the line makes me feel so sad is the last line of this poem

"and now they're wondering why she had to die"

they are wondering but its so late. They did not care for her and she died.
this poem meet the true reality of this world. well done my friend. i don't know who are you. but you are just brilliant. 5/5 + nominated

Quick piece of advice... your title should be spelled "orphan", not "orphen". :)

This poems grate it one of my favorites it was sad and i loved the way you expressed everything.
100% pure talent 5/5

Ohhh wow this poem touched me so bad
It was sooo sad yet so true

I loved everything bout it
Your amazing at poetry...Hun never stop writing this was abouslty beautiful so beautiful it got me teared up(:

1000/1000 from me darl....wow!!!!