I like this :)
just wanting a girl whos gona love you for you and still not giving up hope even tho u havent found her yet <3
5/5

Thanx Holly..i hav hope that i will find her:)

This is wonderful, fantastic job! And someday maybe even sooner then you think you will find her, I'm sure. 5/5

Thanx Dreamer, i am patiently waiting for her,i hope i find her soon

"My life s in despair"
there is something missing with the "s" in this line.
Other then that I liked the poem. It flowed nicely. Good wording.

5/5

Very well done. It was very easy to grasp the feelings of the author and was portrayed in a very efficient manner.
I find that my favourite aspect of the poem is the sense of longing - that wasn't too personal - in the sense that it reflected only the author's heart while relating to potential readers' feelings.

Once again, impeccable

I have corrected that Rose budding, thank you for the observation

Thank you Daniel..

I really liked the missing rib part, it is a great metaphor that I have never heard before. Very original

Wow nice lovely poem I loved it very good an awesome read great job :) 5/5

Paul,

What a wonderful poem

Am hoping to find my missing rib
A girl with a high class
White dazzling eyes
Sweet big lips
^^^
Talking about a missing rib, even though you have not yet met this person, they're already a part of you, of who you are

Let it be exotic, foreign or even forbidden land
^^^
You will go to the ends of the earth if need be to find your true love

An amazing write

x

I love the last line of this poem. :) I donno why, but it just speaks volumes to me. <3 5/5

Hello Paul. Hope you find that girl.