by Liliana
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This is amazing but heartbreaking at the same time, yet its simple and it shows a lot of emotions I like it :) 5/5 |
by Jenni
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A smile on your face |
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Simple and deep at the same time as a love poem should be. I liked the "forever scar" it fit perfect with what you were saying |
by BlueJay
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They have said everything that could possibly be said. Fantastic job! |
by Gabrielle
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Short but very heartfelt i loved it |
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Very powerful, but the grammatical errors messes with the flow a bit. Other than that, it creates a lot of thoughts and images that make you want to read the poem all over again. |
by Vanesa
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Short and lovely. |