Connie,
You turned me into a blubbering mess.
The words just held so much meaning, emotions consumed me. The flow was spot on.
I can't see for tears.
Tara -x-x-

Connie, I believe Ive said it a couple times before, lol, you are very talented. Your poems are songs, even without accompaniment from any musical instrument, they are sweeter(in this case sadder) than the sound of violins playing. Music, thats what youre creating here, music, not just poetry. :D

Beautifully written somthing a bit diffrent from u a very good piece x

What can I say??? would amazing suffice?

WOW OWOWOWOWO!!!

Connie, this last comment (quote) is what made me understand something!

You really know how to convey the message you want to deliver :)

This sent me shivers down my spine.
So tempting to read and very vivid!

Wow, I really like this poem. It is sad but good at the same time. The wording was great and painted the picture for me. It is also a good length. The was good.

I gave it a 5/5

A very powerfully worded dark poem, conveying thoughts of a dark time revisited to the reader, I presume, ending with thoughts of revenge and justice using a gun as a symbolic weapon - I as a reader, can feel the inner anguish, anger, and a need to avenge a wrong. ......Let the healing begin, wrongs will not go unpunished in HIS kingdom. Poetry is a good outlet to vent. So 5/5.