Comments : ONE PERFECT PICTURE

  • 6 years ago

    by Liliana

    I like the repetition of We, good job

  • 6 years ago

    by aanika R I P

    Beautiful it is :)
    n liked the way uv kept it simple yet appealing :)

  • 6 years ago

    by Kips

    God is good in all He does.

  • 5 years ago

    by Xanthe

    I like the repetition here. Kinda fits for my tastes. The message as well is clear. Great job :)

  • 5 years ago

    by Kips

    Thanks for the reviews

  • 5 years ago

    by CathyButterflyJC

    I love this, it has os much meaning, and many can relate to it, I don't see anything wrong with it, I love it, great job, 100/100

  • 5 years ago

    by Kips

    Thanks

  • 5 years ago

    by Yrem Crish

    In my first impression I feel that this piece is annoying because of the repetitions of the first words but as I reading your poem the vividness draw me to continually read your whole poem. It's really great. Good job!
    ~C