by yogi73
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HA! LOved it!! Clever and suggestive. |
by Ole Carsten
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Hi thaks for your kind comment |
by Odin Ebbesen
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Good rythm |
by Ole Carsten
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Tanks for kind comments |
by Ole Carsten
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Tanks for kind comments |
by Odin Ebbesen
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Hi Ole |
by Ole Carsten
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Thanks |
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Wow this is short but amazing and says so much,,a very fantastic delightful poem and greatly written I loved it alot,,creatively intertwined with nature and had great imagery 5/5 |
by Ole Carsten
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Thanks your comments goes through mind and heart for hitting the soul |
by Mr Rhee
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The best word for this, is sweet. I know this was born of want and love. As short as it is, it's also filled with so much more. Thank you. |
by Ole Carsten
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Hi Rhee |
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Wow!!! short but complete.. |
by Ole Carsten
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Hi Marlon25 |
by Yrem Crish
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Short but sweet poem..love this=) |
by Ole Carsten
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Hi Chrismerl |
by Anonymous
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Lol u'll stay in the bed |
by Burning Angel
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This is short, but, yet, it holds so much and it is such a sweet poem! |
by leilani
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I love how you said that you would leave the best places a person could possibly be in but stay close to who ever the person you were talking about is. |