Comments : If I stood on the moon

  • 5 years ago

    by yogi73

    HA! LOved it!! Clever and suggestive.

  • 5 years ago

    by Ole Carsten

    Hi thaks for your kind comment
    br
    Ole Carsten

  • 5 years ago

    by Odin Ebbesen

    Good rythm

  • 5 years ago

    by Ole Carsten

    Tanks for kind comments
    Br
    Ole

  • 5 years ago

    by Ole Carsten

    Tanks for kind comments
    Br
    Ole

  • 5 years ago

    by Odin Ebbesen

    Hi Ole

    A lot og People's are sharing that silent wonderful Dream, to stand ón the Moon, but making lovethere, that is new and original

  • 5 years ago

    by Ole Carsten

    Thanks

  • 5 years ago

    by Innocent Fairy

    Wow this is short but amazing and says so much,,a very fantastic delightful poem and greatly written I loved it alot,,creatively intertwined with nature and had great imagery 5/5

  • 5 years ago

    by Ole Carsten

    Thanks your comments goes through mind and heart for hitting the soul

  • 5 years ago

    by Mr Rhee

    The best word for this, is sweet. I know this was born of want and love. As short as it is, it's also filled with so much more. Thank you.

  • 5 years ago

    by Ole Carsten

    Hi Rhee

    Tanks for you kind words and yes it is short to make feelings stronger

  • 5 years ago

    by marlon lumangyao

    Wow!!! short but complete..

  • 5 years ago

    by Ole Carsten

    Hi Marlon25
    Thanks like your comment, smiling

  • 5 years ago

    by Yrem Crish

    Short but sweet poem..love this=)

  • 5 years ago

    by Ole Carsten

    Hi Chrismerl
    thanks for your kind comment

  • 5 years ago

    by Just That Guy

    Lol u'll stay in the bed

  • 4 years ago

    by Burning Angel

    This is short, but, yet, it holds so much and it is such a sweet poem!

  • 3 years ago

    by leilani

    I love how you said that you would leave the best places a person could possibly be in but stay close to who ever the person you were talking about is.