A witty bond of sincererity. God hears.. Gr8 still!

Like a 'gil' hiding in lies..should be 'girl'
i felt this poem should me more than this(am not saying its bad)..
what it needs is some editing coz i feel with a lil bit of editing here and there, it will b even better. Mayb putting into stanzas, that helps the flow of the poem. I still give it a 5 coz it has a strong message of a girls hope and fears.

She knows that God cares for her
Because through him she was made..

i really loved this line coz its only through God that one will get solace, nice wording too.

to top it all up, u had a nice ending.

Emotional piece Angel-

what I adore about you, is that you let yourself go within your writing, and you don't hold back... very proud of you.... thank you for sharing these pieces with us~

Very emotional and detailed. I love the wording. Excellent job. I've written a lot of sad/dark poems, and it's healthy to let it out. Always let it flow from you, and thank you for sharing it with us.

I like it very much, how long have you been writing, I'm amazed, and I rated 5 !

To Paul Gondwe i think that her poem should be exactly what she wqants it to be not what others do
in my opinion though it was beautiful

I do love your poems

Very touching poem....i love it.. =)

Wow! This was very good! :] Your talented!

Your poems are very beautiful. they really caught my attention. keep it up. your very talented...

The true reality of how girls feel around the world show through.

Very well designed. :)

I feel broken i know how you feel :)

Great poem. Sad, but great!

So sad and so beautiful all at the same time. Well written.