That is so creative!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

I love the simplicity of the idea, yet the complexity of the atmospheres. great

Aww how sweet, I like how you started the poem with I love you, and ended it the same way. It emphasises the power of this phrase and sign of affection which a lot of people do not use enough and they realize too late.

I loved the way you showed the relationship by describing the affects he has not only on you but the things surrounding you like the candles. It is like the prince from a disney film.

I like your poems about true love - they touch me deeper than you might realise and it means a lot for me to be able to read these emotions and know someone else has experienced the real love that I once did.

Great poem about a great love.