This
Is
AMAZING! :D
I loved it everythings great fantastic wonderful and wow I loved it,,greatly written and so so very true,,great job I think I'll definitely read more 5/5

This poem is great. It is really original and refeshing to read.

What I liked most about the poem was how you kept things simple. You can see a lot of time went into the poem but you didn't over think things. Instead you were open and kept the poem light. Your words are simple yet effective.

I can see you gave the poem feeling as I felt twinges of sadness as I read.

Excellent

5/5