Comments : Sleeping With His Memory

  • 14 years ago

    by Jenni

    Wow what a well written and heartfelt poem!

    At first I thought that he might have broken up with you and you're missing him, but it turned out different and you literally had me captivated till the end!

    The feelings are so strong and touching, I like the flow of this poem and the fact that it rhymes too.

    I hope he'll return to you soon. This poems underlines that not only the soldiers do a tough job, that should be appreciated by everybody, but also that their wives and families have tough times to endure.