Comments : Jenni ( a club exercise)

  • 12 years ago

    by Lioness

    Beautiful words and what a lovely dedication to the lovely Jenni!!!

    A gorgeous poem!!!

    x

  • 12 years ago

    by Paul Gondwe

    This is beautifully written, its always good to appreciate friends...

  • 12 years ago

    by Maple Tree

    Very pretty piece for Jenni :-) well done TJ :-)

  • 12 years ago

    by Jenni

    Replace warm with hot and you got it completly right! Just kidding LOL..

    Anyway, thank you for taking the time and effort to 1.) get to know me and 2.) write this poem about me, you make me look sooooooo positive, but you definately hit the nail on the head with the things you wrote.

    Thank you! <3

  • 12 years ago

    by Decayed

    Hahahahha ^
    Jenni :P

    Who doesn't love Jenni... ?? Amazing poem ;)

  • 12 years ago

    by Tara Kay

    Aww TJ, a lovely poem bout a sweet girl,
    we all love Jenni!!

  • 12 years ago

    by L

    Haha.. Yeah, you wrote this piece amazingly.
    You were able to arrange your ideas really well.

    As for me, I really like this stanza

    Playful, silly and
    mischievous. Dancing
    the night away with
    friends at the club.
    The phone, her constant
    companion as she chats
    with the girls.

    I like it because it shows that she has a variety. She doesn't just like reading and day dreaming but she also is knows how to have fun own her own way.

  • 12 years ago

    by KELLiE SHEA

    How sweet, jenni should be honored. 5/5

  • 12 years ago

    by Rihanna

    Stunning..I loved diss(:

    5/5 for sure hun

  • 12 years ago

    by Sylvia

    I don't know Jenni but it seems from the other comments you captured the essence of her and I wouldn't have expected any less from you. She sounds like a lovely person, one that we would benefit having her for a friend. Good job.

  • 12 years ago

    by Exostosis

    Dude, awesome piece.

    You have beautifully portrayed Jenni. And like Sylvia said, I wouldnt expect any less from you.

    Very well written.

  • 12 years ago

    by Ronel McCarthy

    Lovely once again TJ !

  • 12 years ago

    by Innocent Fairy

    Great tribute poem,,amazing I'm sure she loved it 5/5

  • 12 years ago

    by A lonely soul

    TJ: You probably do not know this, but Jenni and I shared some notes long ago when we were new, when people rarely commented on our poems because we were not club members and perhaps newbies. From there on she suddenly discovered the secret to popularity (I am not going to squeal this one), and even won in the weekly contest. So nice to see her write so well and be happy in a group of kite flyers. Fly high Jenni!
    A very nice dedication to a popular girl who writes creatively. It is really wonderful for you to take the time to pen somethong for a club friend.

  • 12 years ago

    by Meena Krish

    Just reading this made me smile and it gives me a picture of how a warm hearted friend she is!

    A blend of wisdom
    intelligence and logic.
    You might find her
    resting lazily under a
    tree reading or day
    dreaming under a moon
    light night.

    ^^The way you have started this poem sets the mood of her personality with vivid images..liked this part!

    An arbitrator, and peace
    maker among her peers.
    They see her wisdom
    and seek her advice.
    Compassionate as she
    heals wounded feelings

    ^^Another nice stanza that sums up the character of Jenni and giving reasons without having to elaborate it :)

    All in all a heart warming friendship poem that would make any reader smile and I am sure that this would have melted Jenni's heart too! Nice to read your works TJ :)

  • 12 years ago

    by The Poet Behind The Poems

    Totally true haha flawlessss