I know THAT girl that was in denial,
and wished for love every night <3

-baby OUR love story is better than 'fairy tales'
we cant lie,
you wanna know why?
cause our author was GOD <3

i love you babe and i love our lil baby thats on his/her way,<3* !

Way too long and structured all wrong no feeling or imagery it is bland and boring and all about your self think before you write it is important and read more poetry to gain what poetry is about

Well I'm not sorry you feel that way because honestly this poem was not just about me

But thanks

Theres never a wrong or right poem honestly, and the words u used babe wer stunning, when it comes from the heart, you can feel it, thats a fact.

Oohh & sir if you dnt like the poem, well why keep reading? or why take ur time to write something like that, read between the lines or use your imagination, and wonder the situation. Lets think outside the box. Have a good day!

I see christophers point. Please don't take his comment by heart. The thing is that this poem is too personal and only a few people can relate to it.
It's not about the length or the structure. In my opinion is that only those who are involve around this poem can fully understand the feelings and the situation.

I like it, but I would have love to see a few metaphors. Just to give my imagination a job.

Overall it was good.

Very nice poem Marino, I think its really cool that through out your journey to marriage you never gave up and pushed for what you wanted. Im glad she came to her senses and realized the catch she had. I really did like the ending to your poem and the idea of your love catching her after she let herself fall. 5/5