Flows perfectly and rhymed beautifully.
A very well written love poem, indeed, 5/5

Great poem :)

There's definately flow in this piece,
I like it, I wasn't crazy about the repition of love is... and the title is sort of cliche, which is what is the first thing we see, and it doesn't draw me in...
but the rhymes I think were good, some felt a little forced and I'd suggest you break it into stanza's to give it more depth and structure.

saying this I like the imagery and some of the wording was very beautiful, just a few minor changes here and there and it would be really good.

Hope my comments are useful to you

love Tara x

Hi friend.
Just voted on your poem.
Seems like you are also smitten.
Just one small error i think, lose the t on weight, i think you meant to say weigh. Apart from that, well done i like it.

Michael you have a talent but try to shorten your poetry and keep the same feeling the shorter a poem the more brilliant it is and that is where the gift comes alive from christopher

I truly liked this poem! Keep up the good work. :) Very emotional, and true.

Good poem

A very good poem..flows perfectly nd well-chozen words :)