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No, it doesn't. :) I've spent countless nights like this!
by Ike Dizzle
Man I be feelin the same way lately. I jus cnt sleep for sum reason
by Nobodys Hero
I loved this the flow was good and it's really funny!
I lay awake until 5am every night then i'm up at 9 for uni so i share your pain!
I can relate to this. I have insomnia and it's a b**ch isn't it?
Anyway great rhyming and flow and it had a somewhat humorous tinge to it.
I think in line 8 there's a typo on throughts Andi t should be thoughts.
by Bradley Peter
I'm a master of the typo. Even manage to squeeze two in this one; line 10. It's supposed to say 'groove' instead of 'grove'.
Thank you for your comment. I think the pressure of trying to sleep to no avail does turn one's mind a little cuckoo.
by Golden AnGel Rhapsodist
I'm insomiac also and my husband called me nocturnal. lol....
He put an optical illusion board on the ceiling and that help me to sleep...
Nice poem and rhyming.
Haha, had to laugh at some parts of this. Rest assured, such restlessness is shared by many, including myself. We think too much I guess. Good rhyming and flowed really well.
Thank you, Mel. As in previous comments, you've blessed me with such praise, and for that I am supremely grateful