Comments : Sleep...Never Heard of It?

  • 5 years ago

    by Solace

    No, it doesn't. :) I've spent countless nights like this!

  • 5 years ago

    by Ike Dizzle

    Man I be feelin the same way lately. I jus cnt sleep for sum reason

  • 4 years ago

    by Nobodys Hero

    I loved this the flow was good and it's really funny!
    I lay awake until 5am every night then i'm up at 9 for uni so i share your pain!

  • 1 year ago

    by Em

    I can relate to this. I have insomnia and it's a b**ch isn't it?

    Anyway great rhyming and flow and it had a somewhat humorous tinge to it.
    I think in line 8 there's a typo on throughts Andi t should be thoughts.

    Em

    • 1 year ago

      by Bradley Peter

      I'm a master of the typo. Even manage to squeeze two in this one; line 10. It's supposed to say 'groove' instead of 'grove'.

      Thank you for your comment. I think the pressure of trying to sleep to no avail does turn one's mind a little cuckoo.

  • 1 year ago

    by Golden AnGel Rhapsodist

    Hi,

    I'm insomiac also and my husband called me nocturnal. lol....

    He put an optical illusion board on the ceiling and that help me to sleep...

    Nice poem and rhyming.

    Gel

  • 2 months ago

    by mossgirl19

    Haha, had to laugh at some parts of this. Rest assured, such restlessness is shared by many, including myself. We think too much I guess. Good rhyming and flowed really well.

    • 2 months ago

      by Bradley Peter

      Thank you, Mel. As in previous comments, you've blessed me with such praise, and for that I am supremely grateful