I red your poem and it is amazing .. U made me feel your pain .. i really like it

I was in a long distance relationship with a girl from miami.It didnt go long though just because she was always going out with someone I didnt like,where as on my part I remained faithful to her.whenever I objected to her lifestyle she would say your culture is different from mine so let me do whatever I wanna do! When we broke up she said something like whats there in your poem!! You made me miss her so much!

I like this poem alot thye flow kept it going till the end rhyming was ok it was a good read all togther 5/5