Very short......very interesting

Hi
I like your poem, it is even short but nice

Wonderful haiku Matt! The title was awesome :) definitely an interesting piece!

Pretty good haiku or senryu, I'm not sure what is the difference between them both. But if I'm not mistaken, they both have 5,7,5 in syllables.

This is a short but sweet piece(cool).

Ohh this is a powerful senryu !!!
very deep... and somberly... well done~

(Haikus are nature based) senryu's are other...

however this could be either now that I think about it... ha ha

correct format for both :-)

I love the images of rain.

This was beautiful

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