Comments : Im sorry I was too late.

  • 13 years ago

    by Dakota

    I really loved this, It gives me a feeling of what I go through all the time :) Good Job 5/5 from me :)

  • 13 years ago

    by Yrem Crish

    I like the flow of your poem here...mind to check

    Your everything to me..."Your-You're", I don't know if it is your style...but try to check..then look the.. "unfortunately"- in 6th line....

    over all..it is a nice written piece/love it!