Very sad :( but you did a great JOB! :)

This is brilliant. It is sad but your emotions, the frustration, the anger has been well expressed.

Awww this is so sad

I am fascinated by the tone and the flow of this poem. I can truly feel the frustration and still the author is straightforward with how he/she feels. The emotions is well expressed. I couldn't help but feel in the shoes of the author when I was reading this piece, it just pulled me in. Excellent.

This is very good(:

Powerful and heartfelt. Could feel the deep emotion in your write Nik.

Well written & expressed...Well done!

~ Olwin.

I know this is written and categorizes as sad, however I found strength in this piece. You stuck up for yourself! That's awesome!..you finally had enough and that moment that your able to do that is awesome

The stanza about your heart and body. LOVED IT!!...it was so in your face/ look what you've done type thing. That was amazing. I enjoyed this

WOW...just WOW

Loved the way you were bang on with your feelings. Most of the crises occur due to unstable mind but here despite of being in pain...you know what you want..this shows your strength. Great piece. Nicely released.

all the best and take care