=) perfect bravo , unthinkable i am really hapPy i can read something that feels a thing

Wonderful :)

I like the twist you put on this classic fairytale :) The rhymes flowed really well. Great job 5/5

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Wonderful! perhaps read "the mad hatter: a back stabbers delight. i think it fits in well with yours. maybe we can do a colab sometime haha. wonderful poem. i am always a sucker for alice. so i thought this was amazing and astonishing really. great job

I wish that I could rhytme this good, people deserve to know the talent you have, you should enter your poems in a contest, I'm sure you stand a very good chance, this is a wonderful piece, 100/100

U are one amazing writer. I love all of your.poems.

Gr8t work :)

Woah this is really good 5/5 from me i love this alot really good spin on the tale of such a sweet girl

Woooooooooooooow i love it so much really enjoyed reading this so well written and so well chosen words 1000/1000 totally deserve it keep on =)