A good write...a beautiful start n end...truly<3
And i think your poem summarised all abt how ppl get betrayed by the ones whom we trust the most...
And your poem did had a bit of grammatical mistakes,but the msg conveyed to the right...
Good work...:)

Awesum, 4/5

I love this...soo good

Sorry to hear of your misplaced trust towards guys...good write.