I love the theme and atmosphere of this piece. The emotion is there but the rhymes seemed too forced, to be honest.. I know the feeling of pain of losing someone, it's definitely different from physical pain. No one can see it, but deep inside you know it's there. Great piece, thoroughly enjoyed reading it :)

keep writing 5/5

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Thank u :)

This is really good :]
5/5

Thank u :)

Anyway I haven't lost someone special or dear to me I just made this poem. thank u for the compliments. :)