Comments : Lost

  • 11 years ago

    by Jake

    WOW! very strong, intricate, and very intriguing words! veyr nice poem! 5/5!

  • 11 years ago

    by Silent Girl

    I feel lost very good poem :) 5/5

  • 11 years ago

    by Kate

    MMM!!!! really strong words and well... nice way to kinda put the blame on someone else when you say:
    "Your lies kept cutting me up inside;
    So don`t blame me for bringing it outside"
    Nice!