Its powerful:)
Good job Ash:)

Nice poem, very 'real!'
'to make myself grow unbored...'.... Clever line!
Well done!!

This poem sinks into our soul, and never leaves the door of our heart, 100/100

Wow. Simply wow. This poem is soooo powerful. I loved it from the first sentence to the last.

"Hearing that beautiful piano and that lovely sad tune of the violin I kiss you goodbye" This is your strongest sentence in here, so beautiful and so pure. Amazing job with this one. :)