First i want to say i love this poem
So much love,so much emotions
hmm there are a few mistakes in it tho
"Three year's flew by to quickly"
year's---years
"I'm wish for the impossible,"
should be
"I wish for the impossible"
or
"I'm wishing for the impossible"

good job 5/5 =)

Jenn, I did not know this was for your son!
At first read, it's like for a lover or something, but when I read the message at the bottom and re-read this, it makes complete sense. Throughout all your poems, I read a little bit of your son here and there, and I wish I myself have an inspiration like that. All your poems are heart-felt, they grab the readers and push them to the brink of getting teary-eyed. Among all the poems submitted, this was obviously the most beautiful and emotionally impacting. Amazing job. Keep writing :)
-X

Great piece. I love this poem and I like that this poem was dedicated for your son and he was your inspiration. Nice written. Keep writing:)
5/5

Very sweet dedication to your son. very touching 5/5

The antidote, for my sorrow.
The oxygen, feeding my flame.
Since the day you came into my life,
I knew I'd never be the same

I absolutely love this stanza,
what a beautiful poem.