Beautiful, so much mystery, and creative units, I love the word choice you used and so on

Hmm this is original
i haven't seen anybody talking about personalities
within in poem till now but you

i didn't like repeating "dark princess"
but i guess u didn't have any other words
to use
and u used many filler words and lines
which i suggest revising

over all
it was great write
5/5 keep writing =)

Oh wow, this is amazing !! Unique and amazingly written 500/5 ;) x

This is unique and beautifully written..

This is so very beautiful!
5/5

Very well written poem :) 5/5

"Dying inside but with a smile"....oh, how that line touched me! I enjoyed this piece - just one very, very minor constructive feedback, sometimes the word phrasing gets a little confusing (maybe its just to me), but it definitely doesn't detract the poem's beauty!