Hmm I think this is nice write
I like the idea in it
your wording was going well with it
This poem's tone is lovely
great read 5/5
Keep writing =)

--Great piece. I like the simplicity of your words here and the natural ideas that you conveyed how much the persona loves the person in this poem. Heart soothing and very sweet...

Never again will you be haunted by any wraith
There will be no awkward moment
For now i am only looking for atonement
But this is only while my blood runs red
After that I will be dead

--Nice ending. But try to try to check the "wraith--it should be wrath" in the first line. Nonetheless, I really enjoy this piece. Keep writing more:))
5/5
~C

Wraith is a scottish word for ghost or spirit :)

Wraith is a scottish word for ghost or spirit :)

Wraith is a scottish word for ghost or spirit :)