Comments : Help

  • 11 years ago

    by Dagmar Wilson

    I can relate to your poem
    falling in and out of depression
    something that is hard to control
    self esteem is low, that feeling of being
    non existent, unfortunately some people
    even if they tried, they can't understand
    It's nothing you did or didn't do, it's a feeling
    you going through. There is help out there
    where you can seek help, if anything
    you can talk to me

  • 11 years ago

    by Alanis

    This very relateable. Depression is something hard to get by
    But when you get to the end of the tunnel there is a light waiting for you:) keep going and keep writing

  • 11 years ago

    by Marvellous

    When you reach for top, dress the floor. Anything can happen, when close. Depend not on things around here. Nothing has come to stay, but Truth. It gets better, the more we share. Things go wrong, to turn good at last. Be strong, for a good turn, awaits. Against all odds, victory abounds.

  • 11 years ago

    by Gabriel

    Another well done but sad poem, I notice that most of your poems relate to your life and the consistent emotions and problems that you have which gives a more emotional reaction to the reader. Keep up the good work:) 5/5.

  • 11 years ago

    by CathyButterflyJC

    THIS IS A FANTASTIC POEM, it really spoke to me and I fell in love with it, I could read it over and over again, wonderful job with this poem!!