Comments : You Are A Twist In My Poetry

  • 11 years ago

    by nouriguess

    A favourite!

    Love how you incorporated so many things in here. Loved the twist.

  • 11 years ago

    by Yakari Gabriel

    "
    I never told you, did I dear-
    that you have made my heart swell
    like an ocean-sized sun,
    and I can't stay away"

    mary anne... what's the secret... how do you come up with so so so much greatness.. its like your inspiration NEVER goes away.

    you are the type of poet that can write about everything/anything.

    you are a very special poet child,
    and I might not always comment.

    but I read each and everyone of your pieces.

    I am inlove with the gentleness you put into your poems. how they are so so soft all the time...

    I'd call them pillows. sometimes, I just wanna rest my head on your words. so soothing are they.

    you go girl..

    this was so beautiful. so beautiful.

  • 11 years ago

    by Meme

    This is sweeeeeeeeeeeeeeet. I love it, I so love it :))))
    Cant stop smiling after reading it, hehehe ..

    Well done !!