Comments : Hate me

  • 5 years ago

    by Karla

    Unconditional love is divine. Lovely piece.

  • 5 years ago

    by average thoughts

    Let it all be lost in madness;
    Let me be submerged in sadness;
    Take away every bit of hope I had;
    Make me wish I would be dead.

    But still I can`t help but love you;

    true lines ,,i hv faced al this fr a vry lng time in my life...and u r right ,,iits nt easy to comeback ..i jus loved ur poem so so so much janis ,,

    i think u r brilliant poet ,,

    i mean rhyming is nt an easy task ,,bt u did it so well...flow and emotions were perfect...loved it

  • 5 years ago

    by Lostlove1

    Beautifully penned Janis..Loved this part, awesome twist :)

    But still I can`t help but love you;
    And you always knew it didn`t you?

    Pen on friend!

  • 5 years ago

    by PETER EDWARDS

    A good poem Janis, I liked reading this and it rhymes!! Well done!! Loved your words!!

  • 5 years ago

    by mandy

    I loved the last stanza. Touching write, I could feel everything you wrote. 5/5

    mandy :)

  • 5 years ago

    by Sean Ooi

    Great poem. I just wish I could write as well

  • 5 years ago

    by Rebecca Davies

    Brilliant poem, with so much say emotion very well written, well done! 5/5

  • 5 years ago

    by SheenaMarie

    Very powerful write gripping from begining to end 5/5

  • 5 years ago

    by SheenaMarie

    Very powerful write gripping from begining to end 5/5

  • 5 years ago

    by PETER EDWARDS

    I liked this poem, so very sad, almost desperate piece.

    I could feel the raw emotion hitting me as I read it. Good work!!

  • 5 years ago

    by LostWords

    Intriguing. I love how you write. It is how I write as well. So much emotion in so little words.

  • 5 years ago

    by aanika R I P

    Wow! an amazing write must say

    Keep leaving me again every time;
    Let me know you will never be mine;
    Keep showing that I no longer matter;
    Just stay there and watch my heart shatter.

    these lines depicts whole lot of frustration though
    but just loved the immense love that has been shown in last stanza :) 5/5

  • 5 years ago

    by LittleMermaid

    I feel the anger n sadness in this poem...but i think, its more about the sadness n depressed heart..
    powerful writing,with well described emotions.
    *_*

  • 5 years ago

    by LittleMermaid

    I feel the anger n sadness in this poem...but i think, its more about the sadness n depressed heart..
    powerful writing,with well described emotions.
    *_*

  • 5 years ago

    by Suyechha

    But still I can't help but love you
    And you always knew it didn't you??

    Sad But true..It is the feeling when the one we love doesn't love in return.but we can't hate the one coz its love that always wins over hate..
    Love this poem