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Unconditional love is divine. Lovely piece.
by average thoughts
Let it all be lost in madness;
Let me be submerged in sadness;
Take away every bit of hope I had;
Make me wish I would be dead.
But still I can`t help but love you;true lines ,,i hv faced al this fr a vry lng time in my life...and u r right ,,iits nt easy to comeback ..i jus loved ur poem so so so much janis ,,
i think u r brilliant poet ,,
i mean rhyming is nt an easy task ,,bt u did it so well...flow and emotions were perfect...loved it
Beautifully penned Janis..Loved this part, awesome twist :)
But still I can`t help but love you;
And you always knew it didn`t you?
Pen on friend!
by PETER EDWARDS
A good poem Janis, I liked reading this and it rhymes!! Well done!! Loved your words!!
I loved the last stanza. Touching write, I could feel everything you wrote. 5/5
by Sean Ooi
Great poem. I just wish I could write as well
by Rebecca Bentley
Brilliant poem, with so much say emotion very well written, well done! 5/5
Very powerful write gripping from begining to end 5/5
I liked this poem, so very sad, almost desperate piece.
I could feel the raw emotion hitting me as I read it. Good work!!
Intriguing. I love how you write. It is how I write as well. So much emotion in so little words.
by aanika R I P
Wow! an amazing write must say
Keep leaving me again every time;
Let me know you will never be mine;
Keep showing that I no longer matter;
Just stay there and watch my heart shatter.
these lines depicts whole lot of frustration though
but just loved the immense love that has been shown in last stanza :) 5/5
I feel the anger n sadness in this poem...but i think, its more about the sadness n depressed heart..
powerful writing,with well described emotions.
But still I can't help but love you
And you always knew it didn't you??
Sad But true..It is the feeling when the one we love doesn't love in return.but we can't hate the one coz its love that always wins over hate..
Love this poem