Comments : Love is a treasure filled with diamonds of promisses

  • 11 years ago

    by Odin Ebbesen

    Strong poem about your favorite topic, love and emotions

    this sounds serious, something going on?

    Love is about passion in life,
    this stuff that makes a good wife.

  • 11 years ago

    by Dagmar Wilson

    You have such a unique way of talking
    about love, that will make a readers heart melt.

  • 11 years ago

    by Naughtymouse

    Amazing write! I love to write on this subject (dont we all) but you go that extra mile, hit me deep this one eh?

    I loved your title too pulled me straight and had to read it :-)

    Great job :-)

  • 11 years ago

    by Thomas

    Very elegant way of talking about love with a lot of truth woven into it.

    1 remark I have is the grammatical errors:

    our love are indeed no exception from that. (are should be is)

    Other than that it is a great piece.

    5/5