Extremely sad poem, Marilyn. I too understand what it feels like when someone never gives you a chance. Very heartbreaking poem you have here - it hits too close to home for me...

It seems like you tried to rhyme in this poem, but in some parts just gave up on it. I don't know if you were doing formed poetry either, because I am not a particular fan...however even though you did not fully rhyme here, I still thought that the poem was beautiful :)

"Tears in my eyes, you won't see me cry anymore.
I'm hurt, I'm tired, my insides feel so sore."

^ This has to be my favorite stanza because I know what you are talking about. Makes my insides sore just remembering it sometimes.

As an afterthought, I also like how you kept using the title. You did not just use it once, but I think two times if I remember right. I thought that was a pretty neat idea too.

Very beautiful poem. If this is true, I hope all is well now...
5/5

Whoa, very sad poem. But i like it. Sorry about he didnt give you a chance.