Comments : Letting You Go

  • 6 years ago

    by Illusion

    It was not at all easy as it seems,
    To let go of you and those beautiful dreams,
    Excellence opening and sad too. The flow is good and even seems like a music.. 5/5.

  • 6 years ago

    by average thoughts

    Omg..prati, wat a prfction alng wid beauty of lv nd sadness..nominated

  • 6 years ago

    by LittleMermaid

    Thank u so much for ur precious comment ^_^

  • 6 years ago

    by The Poet Behind The Poems

    Simple but yet it had everything ... It's like there's nothing more you could say a really good piece true emotion :) 5/5


  • 6 years ago

    by Xanthe

    I'm sure a lot of people can relate to this.

    This is actually inspiring, Pratikshya. There are a lot of people who just keep holding grudges and don't seem to move on or even try to let go.

    "Idon't regret about those feelings for you,"
    About: could easily be dropped off, or change it to all ?

    "My hardened lips uttering goodbyes,"
    Uttering: uttered ?

    Good piece. Keep writing :)

  • 6 years ago

    by Suyechha

    So nycly written..loved it..

  • 6 years ago

    by Bubble

    You are superbb...God bless you dear..:-)

  • 6 years ago

    by Yrem Crish

    This is really beautiful...oh, you're such a good writer, Pratikshya.! I love the whole poem...really, deserve to get 5/5:))

  • 6 years ago

    by Dagmar Wilson

    Time will heall all wounds and life goes on
    beautiful written

  • 6 years ago

    by Tina

    Really a nice poem. superb!!!!

  • 6 years ago

    by Whiskurz

    Beautifully written......Whisk

  • 5 years ago

    by lillie

    Beautiful poem :)
    Seems someone broke this girls heart but
    She is strong to move on great write!