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It was not at all easy as it seems,
To let go of you and those beautiful dreams,
Excellence opening and sad too. The flow is good and even seems like a music.. 5/5.
by average thoughts
Omg..prati, wat a prfction alng wid beauty of lv nd sadness..nominated
Thank u so much for ur precious comment ^_^
by The Poet Behind The Poems
Simple but yet it had everything ... It's like there's nothing more you could say a really good piece true emotion :) 5/5
Thank u for the comment^_^
I'm sure a lot of people can relate to this.
This is actually inspiring, Pratikshya. There are a lot of people who just keep holding grudges and don't seem to move on or even try to let go.
"Idon't regret about those feelings for you,"
About: could easily be dropped off, or change it to all ?
"My hardened lips uttering goodbyes,"
Uttering: uttered ?
Good piece. Keep writing :)
So nycly written..loved it..
You are superbb...God bless you dear..:-)
by Yrem Crish
This is really beautiful...oh, you're such a good writer, Pratikshya.! I love the whole poem...really, deserve to get 5/5:))
by Dagmar Wilson
Time will heall all wounds and life goes on
Really a nice poem. superb!!!!
Beautiful poem :)
Seems someone broke this girls heart but
She is strong to move on great write!