Comments : Together into blackness...

  • 5 years ago

    by Karla

    Sad piece my friend. Stay strong.

  • 5 years ago

    by Alanis

    I am ganna start off by saying "wow"
    I just can't take my eyes away from this amazing piece
    Your talent never seizes to amaze me
    You are one of THE best I have ever seen
    You are one of the best on this website.
    Every time I read your poems I am inspired. I read and
    I just can believe the beauty. You are an artist of the mind.

    What captured me where the first lines.
    Here we are again, happy together;
    This sweet and happy moment wither;
    As soon as night falls down on us;
    Again I hear this bloody chorus

    Those are also my favourite. I love ur dark twist and can't wait for more poems. Keep writing

  • 5 years ago

    by Alanis

    I am ganna start off by saying "wow"
    I just can't take my eyes away from this amazing piece
    Your talent never seizes to amaze me
    You are one of THE best I have ever seen
    You are one of the best on this website.
    Every time I read your poems I am inspired. I read and
    I just can believe the beauty. You are an artist of the mind.

    What captured me where the first lines.
    Here we are again, happy together;
    This sweet and happy moment wither;
    As soon as night falls down on us;
    Again I hear this bloody chorus

    Those are also my favourite. I love ur dark twist and can't wait for more poems. Keep writing

  • 5 years ago

    by Burning Angel

    This is strong. i love it