Comments : Omen of sin.

  • 6 years ago

    by Karla

    Loved the flow Janis. Amazing piece.

  • 6 years ago

    by Watercolourz

    Well you turned my quote into a poem so the credit is yours. Amazing stuff as always mate.

  • 6 years ago

    by Lostlove1

    Powerful poem Janis...great write :)

  • 6 years ago

    by Ingrid de Klerck

    This left me sad, it reads like an ongoing ride through hell, with death at the end of it.

    Well done on this grim piece,

    5/5 Ingrid