Comments : LOVE TRIAL

  • 13 years ago

    by Blood of a Lion

    Need to take away the all caps, I'm not trying be a critic or anything but a lot of people consider that kind of writing sloppy and uninteresting.
    But it had its moments going through it.

    Good work.

  • 13 years ago

    by nouriguess

    So well-written

    • 13 years ago

      by LUCKY NGWENHA

      THANKS FOR THE COMPLIMENT.WROTE THIS POEM FROM WHAT I'AM GOING THROUGH.

  • 13 years ago

    by Maalouf

    Good poem!

  • 13 years ago

    by LUCKY NGWENHA

    Thanks just a poem from current love exprience.