Comments : Arrows

  • 13 years ago

    by Yakari Gabriel

    DAMN.

  • 13 years ago

    by Britt

    AH a man of my own heart. This makes me want to go shoot my bow, haha.

    Love the metaphors here! Awesome job :)

    • 13 years ago

      by Nevi

      Ahaha. Thanks Britt! and yeah, I'd like to get out and shoot mine, but it's broken!!! :(

  • 13 years ago

    by Britt

    WHAT. Fix that!

  • 13 years ago

    by Poet on the Piano

    Wow, really enjoyed this write Nevi! The imagery and the metaphor takes the reader in. That fear felt tangible, like while pulling back the arrow your heart took the fall. Brilliant job, keep writing :]

  • 11 years ago

    by Burning Angel

    This is amazing!

  • 11 years ago

    by Burning Angel

    I love this poem!