Wow, i love ever second of this poem.
Awesome job. :)

Stellar! Just some points:
'God tells us to love each-other as our neighbor' it would give better sound if it reads 'God tells us to love each-other as neighbors' or " as brothers'.
The expression 'more then just a smile' should be 'more than just a smile' because 'then' is different from 'than'.
In the expression 'Your needed on this world', I think you mean 'You're needed on this world' because 'your' has different meaning.
This aside, I really enjoyed reading the poem which gave me an impression that all of us should be like that. Thank you