Wow! Love this a lot lol. Deep emotion and the words just flowed naturally. Loooove it!

Cool poem. So this is about suicidal, I can see.
I like how this flowed.
I only suggest that you remove all the ".." after every line.

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That probably happens to those who both were in love but has no strength to tell, it simply because of the fears they're facing through ;p

Thank you, I'm glad you like it ^_^

What a sad poem. Good clear piece. Keep writing

NO NO NO, that's so sad, I started crying right here in class. !!! So sad, but extrememly well written 10000/10000

Hey guys!
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