Comments : The letter tells it all

  • 5 years ago

    by Alanis

    Wow! Love this a lot lol. Deep emotion and the words just flowed naturally. Loooove it!

    • 5 years ago

      by Haley Doss

      Thank you girl:) more poems on the way:)

  • 5 years ago

    by Decayed

    Cool poem. So this is about suicidal, I can see.
    I like how this flowed.
    I only suggest that you remove all the ".." after every line.

    :)

    • 5 years ago

      by Haley Doss

      I like to put the ...'s its just my unique way of writing poetry. And thank you :)

  • 5 years ago

    by Jhierren Paz

    That probably happens to those who both were in love but has no strength to tell, it simply because of the fears they're facing through ;p

  • 5 years ago

    by Jhierren Paz

    Thank you, I'm glad you like it ^_^

  • 4 years ago

    by Kips

    What a sad poem. Good clear piece. Keep writing

  • 4 years ago

    by CathyButterflyJC

    NO NO NO, that's so sad, I started crying right here in class. !!! So sad, but extrememly well written 10000/10000

  • 2 years ago

    by Haleyy dOss

    Hey guys!
    check out my other poems I'll be posting!
    I had to make a New page my Login name is:
    Imalwayswinninqq
    😍